Metaphor Proposal #3

this is the first one i did
 I was thinking of since I was in disney land  and in a pool at the time of my memory that i make a disney land hat out of balloons. Some would be filled with water and some not.

Mfah and Camh pics

PROCESS FOR WALL PIECE

Should I keep it like this I like the negative space i might need to break it some more...

Metaphor Proposal #2

This is my second Proposal for the metaphor piece. Its very much the same as the first but they are still somewhat attached and in the middle on both sides I was thinking of two pieces to represent separation. any ideas?

Metaphor Proposal #1

My first proposal for the metaphor. The two half circles is a tub split in half and the circles on top of them are balloons

Uncomfortable Video And Critique

Ill start with the bad things first:
 It was said that I should have saved looking directly at the camera until the very end of the video and it reminds people of the movie Jeepers Creepers.
The good things said:
the camera angle made my eye look like it was going into my skull and popping out. My eye looks uncomfortable. The video was abstract.

Final Monologue

here goes nothing