Here goes my story line and mapping projects

As for my critique for this piece: I was told that i did a poor job on hiding the wood at the top of my piece (i honestly forgot that there are taller people in class xD)

I should of colored in the missing glass space with black.

Metaphor Proposal #3

this is the first one i did
 I was thinking of since I was in disney land  and in a pool at the time of my memory that i make a disney land hat out of balloons. Some would be filled with water and some not.

Mfah and Camh pics

PROCESS FOR WALL PIECE

Should I keep it like this I like the negative space i might need to break it some more...

Metaphor Proposal #2

This is my second Proposal for the metaphor piece. Its very much the same as the first but they are still somewhat attached and in the middle on both sides I was thinking of two pieces to represent separation. any ideas?

Metaphor Proposal #1

My first proposal for the metaphor. The two half circles is a tub split in half and the circles on top of them are balloons

Uncomfortable Video And Critique

Ill start with the bad things first:
 It was said that I should have saved looking directly at the camera until the very end of the video and it reminds people of the movie Jeepers Creepers.
The good things said:
the camera angle made my eye look like it was going into my skull and popping out. My eye looks uncomfortable. The video was abstract.

Final Monologue

here goes nothing

HmWork Part 2

The items i chose were:
Sight: family, grades, what the future could be, what i hope for the future to bbe
Sound: Laughing, phone calls, the sound of my brother mother sister and father, sighs gasps the clicking of a keyboard
Touch: Familiar embraces

2D HmWRK part 1

The 15 objects that I envisioned were: my dog, gumballs, raffel ticket machine, my moms car, a ferris wheel, rain, a windmill, basketball, my nephew, a bat (the animal), sparkler, a tornado, a thunderstorm, and a giant ball.
1) Actually I am about the same when visualizing people and objects its just when I havent seen a object before that it gets a little tough.
2) I am better at 3D objects interestingly enough. My imagination likes 3D when i try 2D..... nope just 3D xD.
3) its only when i envision nature do i actually have something of a background but other than that its floating in nothingness.
4) Hopefully its somewhere else because its kinda blank when i envision things.
5) In my field(animation) I would think it would be needed because say my boss wants me to design a character but he only gives me the bare necessity of what he is looking for. It is up to me to take what I a given give it a personality and a place. The mind is a great tool.

White space photos

Ill save my breath with an excuse on why there are only 3. Afterall, Excuses Are....

Modular Madness Proposal

here are my modular madness proposals in the end I chose to do the bottom one the top just wasnt that interesting to me after i had sketched it out...

Cardboard 3d proposals

In the end this was chosen as the design I was to do...

Mark Making Homework 1

Here are my mark making drawings had some fun doing these though i think i got on my roommates nerves...

Video Monologue peer review

I didnt really have any feedback from my group except to know what I am going to say ahead of time and to no be so afraid to curse. The monologue that we reviewed was my rant/story about heb and customers.